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  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    I've thrown away or burned countless notebooks of poetry/songs.

    I'm not sure how I feel about that.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    the wolf wrote:
    I've thrown away or burned countless notebooks of poetry/songs.

    I'm not sure how I feel about that.

    and by the still warm ashes
    of yet another empty page
    it was pristine and crystalline clear to her how
    she had built her own fucking cage
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    saw a shadow across the backyard
    just beyond the tree line
    moving as you moved
    at one time
    my heart caught in my throat
    I called out
    but of course there was
    no answer
    heard a murmur in the hall
    sounded as you did
    at one time
    I cried out
    but, again there was
    no answer
    JoJo runs to the front door
    wagging all over
    as he always has
    he too hears
    no answer
    still and always
    no answer
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    There is a fairly large time discrepancy between the time you think you are done peeing, and the time you actualy ARE done peeing.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    the wolf wrote:
    There is a fairly large time discrepancy between the time you think you are done peeing, and the time you actualy ARE done peeing.

    LOL
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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i should feel hungry but all i feel is blah.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    ok its time to feed my mind.. tho reading jason ellis im not quite sure the hunger will be satiated. :lol:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    mysticweed wrote:
    saw a shadow across the backyard
    just beyond the tree line
    moving as you moved
    at one time
    my heart caught in my throat
    I called out
    but of course there was
    no answer
    heard a murmur in the hall
    sounded as you did
    at one time
    I cried out
    but, again there was
    no answer
    JoJo runs to the front door
    wagging all over
    as he always has
    he too hears
    no answer
    still and always
    no answer


    this made a lump in my throat and it took a while before I could comment, you're something else G.

    Godfather.
  • CHANGEinWAVES
    CHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    I liked the way he said my name.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    So many worlds within one world so distant from one another
    Never knowing what it's like to have or have not
    Some keep themselves locked within prisons
    If they could only see the key is right there
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    You think it's about you but it's not.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Some decision has already been made in the sky.
    How does that affect our individual daily lives?
    We decide.
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  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    rollings wrote:
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life

    This is lovely. :)
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  • supersonicyears
    supersonicyears Posts: 2,619
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    "In the age of darkness
    want to be enlightened"
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    justam wrote:
    rollings wrote:
    at night
    when the wind blows
    the trees full their total motion
    and shuffles the sounds that surround you through and fills all the air

    your thoughts are exactly the night is
    crickets

    the stars make their presence gloria known they command your
    silence
    crickets

    you might think of how this is this night

    you might think of your life

    This is lovely. :)
    and could go on for 12,004 pages
    at least 7
    easily

    it is the beginning of one epic poem and only printed in hard back cover
    often covered in dust and hidden to be kept safe
    it is housed in only finer libraries and schools yet should be read by low rent
    this is great poetic literature; the exact front of life written by rollings and her basketball dirtbike tires, trees, yoyos, finch and one seemingly intoxicated $4 vintage monkey cymbals smashing little shit resting on the couch next to her
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • the wolf
    the wolf Posts: 7,027
    chadwick wrote:
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea

    some of the lovely ladies here wanted to do this about a year or so ago. i can't remember who, but they wanted to complie a collection and have it published.
    Peace, Love.


    "To question your government is not unpatriotic --
    to not question your government is unpatriotic."
    -- Sen. Chuck Hagel
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the wolf wrote:
    chadwick wrote:
    You know what's sad to me is all the brilliant writer's on this forum and only we get to see the writing. It would be great if there could be a book of short stories and poems that were chosen from all the writing here.
    i've been saying this for years. it is a great idea

    some of the lovely ladies here wanted to do this about a year or so ago. i can't remember who, but they wanted to complie a collection and have it published.

    lovely ladies?? then i sure know it wasnt me then. :lol:
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i know i know i fuckin' know... last night even GIRLS was telling me so.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say