a little whiskey, and i get poetic

ed243421 · January 2012

i stand in the shadows
and wait for the light
to move me
but every day eludes me

i swim down deep
to find life
and rise above the sea
eternally

i find this world
amusing
a mandatory greed
as seeds succeed

i wait for change
a cleansing
with only needs
allowed to be

F Me In The Brain · January 2012

I like that Eric.
Was just thinking the same thing (your title) as I was on drink 3 and reading through some of my old writing. I put it down, made another drink...fired up the laptop and saw your title. Cool!
(Shochu for me, not Whiskey, but same difference.)

I like this a lot though, it made me think of 'push me, pull me.'

:thumbup:

Godfather. · January 2012

DANG Ed ! this is great ! I don't recomend drinking too much but doing more poetry would be cool.

Godfather.

pepper · January 2012

This is good!

mysticweed · January 2012

this is very cool

a little whiskey and i get prophetic
(or is it pathetic) hmmm

rollings · January 2012

ed243421 wrote:

i stand in the shadows
and wait for the light
to move me
but every day eludes me

i swim down deep
to find life
and rise above the sea
eternally

i find this world
amusing
a mandatory greed
as seeds succeed

i wait for change
a cleansing
with only needs
allowed to be

But what does it all mean?

a little whiskey, and i get poetic

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