a little whiskey, and i get poetic

ed243421
ed243421 Posts: 7,744
edited January 2012 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i stand in the shadows
and wait for the light
to move me
but every day eludes me

i swim down deep
to find life
and rise above the sea
eternally

i find this world
amusing
a mandatory greed
as seeds succeed

i wait for change
a cleansing
with only needs
allowed to be
The whole world will be different soon... - EV
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  • F Me In The Brain
    F Me In The Brain this knows everybody from other commets Posts: 31,883
    I like that Eric.
    Was just thinking the same thing (your title) as I was on drink 3 and reading through some of my old writing. I put it down, made another drink...fired up the laptop and saw your title. Cool!
    (Shochu for me, not Whiskey, but same difference.)

    I like this a lot though, it made me think of 'push me, pull me.'

    :thumbup:
    The love he receives is the love that is saved
  • Godfather.
    Godfather. Posts: 12,504
    DANG Ed ! this is great ! I don't recomend drinking too much but doing more poetry would be cool. :D

    Godfather.
  • pepper
    pepper Posts: 155
    This is good!
    Pepper- I am faith without religion, without bruised knees and pleas for forgiveness...
  • mysticweed
    mysticweed Posts: 3,710
    this is very cool

    a little whiskey and i get prophetic
    (or is it pathetic) hmmm
    fuck 'em if they can't take a joke

    "what a long, strange trip it's been"
  • rollings
    rollings unknown Posts: 7,127
    ed243421 wrote:
    i stand in the shadows
    and wait for the light
    to move me
    but every day eludes me

    i swim down deep
    to find life
    and rise above the sea
    eternally

    i find this world
    amusing
    a mandatory greed
    as seeds succeed

    i wait for change
    a cleansing
    with only needs
    allowed to be

    But what does it all mean? :mrgreen:

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