with open eyes
 
            
                
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                    I've lived too long
in this ocean of still thoughts
my head's grown tired
and I don't see no shores
but what I see on the horizon
look's like God
For now I just want back
the times we had
when I lay in black
with open eyes
in daylight nights
painting you and I
Sat on the bench
amid teardrops on the grass
by the hidden river
beneath that tree
reaching to embrace
the nearby river
I found us
in a hereafter
and saw a tear in your eye
for the dying nature
still can't believe I came to
with you by my side
in an age snow white
and you had black eyes
We lived for eternity
but I saw with clarity
your tears that night
with my open eyes
in a dying room
with a ray of light
so divine
it burnt us alive
your tears dried
we were ashes
left intertwined
[lest we forget, you and I]
                in this ocean of still thoughts
my head's grown tired
and I don't see no shores
but what I see on the horizon
look's like God
For now I just want back
the times we had
when I lay in black
with open eyes
in daylight nights
painting you and I
Sat on the bench
amid teardrops on the grass
by the hidden river
beneath that tree
reaching to embrace
the nearby river
I found us
in a hereafter
and saw a tear in your eye
for the dying nature
still can't believe I came to
with you by my side
in an age snow white
and you had black eyes
We lived for eternity
but I saw with clarity
your tears that night
with my open eyes
in a dying room
with a ray of light
so divine
it burnt us alive
your tears dried
we were ashes
left intertwined
[lest we forget, you and I]
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            Very moving piece. I specially like these lines.
 with my open eyes
 in a dying room
 with a ray of light
 so divine
 it burnt us aliveI am just a dreamer, but you are just a dream...
 If I knew where it was I would take you there.0
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            thanks Buru... I'm glad it moves you... across oceans in Argentina:)0
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