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justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited July 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • ClutchTheDawn
    ClutchTheDawn Posts: 160
    "Rat-a-tat-click
    Klat-a-fat-tick"

    sounds like me trying to build the deck. well, actually, that sounded more like "rat-a-tat-click, klat-a-fat-f#%k" :)

    and I really like the sound of "terra forming". great choice of words
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Thanks! :)

    I think you're right about it sounding like deck-building...

    I couldn't quite figure out how to make the clackity sound of pebbles I was hearing in my head so hammers on wood and metal came out. :D
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  • Ian M
    Ian M Posts: 123
    Awesome sounds in this one, justam - I read it aloud but under my breath just so people here wouldn't think I was nuts :)
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  • Steve Dunne
    Steve Dunne Posts: 4,965
    maybe it's just me but i was almost singing that as i was reading it...love it!
    I love to turn you on
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Steve Dunne wrote:
    maybe it's just me but i was almost singing that as i was reading it...love it!

    :)
    Ian M wrote:
    Awesome sounds in this one, justam - I read it aloud but under my breath just so people here wouldn't think I was nuts :)

    Thanks! :)
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