The Perpetual Poem

Holey Ghost · July 2006

I'm new here but I have lurked for a little while and have enjoyed the very creative poetry here. I like to write poetry too, and rather than just reposting poetry that was inspired elsewhere I'd love to interact people here to write poetry, together.

So, with in mind, add a line, or a stanza or more.....and let's see what we can collectively create.

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

DopeBeastie · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

Bu2 · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

Bu2 · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

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Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

Bu2 · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum

And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in

I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum

And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in

I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how

She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond

Yet is is heart and soul that I am fond

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum

And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in

I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how

She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond

Yet is is her heart and soul that I am fond

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum

And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in

I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how

She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond

Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
as bad as it can sometimes be
the human spirit, a limitless pond

diving deep, breath after breath
i feel life on my skin

The rush of blood to the head
when we meld spirit-to-spirit
with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
mind to mind
body to body
when she is wrapped up in mine
skin-to-skin

Holey Ghost · July 2006

She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course

scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and

...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight

The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game

The game called Life

It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise

This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame

yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

yeah! and she was an Angel too

and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum

And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in

I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how

She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond

Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
as bad as it can sometimes be
the human spirit, a limitless pond

diving deep, breath after breath
i feel life on my skin

The rush of blood to the head
when we meld spirit-to-spirit
with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
mind to mind
body to body
when she is wrapped up in mine
skin-to-skin

but then!
her b/f walked in

The Perpetual Poem

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