The Perpetual Poem

Holey Ghost
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I'm new here but I have lurked for a little while and have enjoyed the very creative poetry here. I like to write poetry too, and rather than just reposting poetry that was inspired elsewhere I'd love to interact people here to write poetry, together.
So, with in mind, add a line, or a stanza or more.....and let's see what we can collectively create.
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
So, with in mind, add a line, or a stanza or more.....and let's see what we can collectively create.
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
Create Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeurCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sightFeels Good Inc.0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's gameCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
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She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of ParadiseCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tankCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel tooCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel too
and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum
And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in
I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her howFeels Good Inc.0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel too
and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum
And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in
I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how
She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond
Yet is is heart and soul that I am fondCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel too
and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum
And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in
I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how
She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond
Yet is is her heart and soul that I am fondCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel too
and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum
And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in
I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how
She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond
Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
as bad as it can sometimes be
the human spirit, a limitless pond
diving deep, breath after breath
i feel life on my skin
The rush of blood to the head
when we meld spirit-to-spirit
with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
mind to mind
body to body
when she is wrapped up in mine
skin-to-skinCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0 -
She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
their noses were full of it, so were there ears
but their mouths, open-empty and
...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
They rode on, towards the night
such a fierce and gruesome sight
The stars in the heavens were all aflame
Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
black holes sucking up space
comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
it was all Mother's Nature's game
The game called Life
It has rules, barriers, and goals
Winners and losers
It can be filled with strife, survival of life
It can be an island of Paradise
This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
Was player's player of games
She whispered to me softly...
That I was a lion in her den
and she came to life for me to tame
yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
yeah! and she was an Angel too
and if I ever find out
what planet she's from
I'm gonna get there...
I'm gonna hand her some rum
And then I'll teach her
how to play gin
And then I'll tell her
what a state our planet is in
I've made a vow
I'm gonna show her how
She's just angel from heaven
sent to deliver me from myself
sent to show me the way
to the moon, the stars and beyond
Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
as bad as it can sometimes be
the human spirit, a limitless pond
diving deep, breath after breath
i feel life on my skin
The rush of blood to the head
when we meld spirit-to-spirit
with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
mind to mind
body to body
when she is wrapped up in mine
skin-to-skin
but then!
her b/f walked inCreate Good Things........
Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads0
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