The Perpetual Poem

Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
I'm new here but I have lurked for a little while and have enjoyed the very creative poetry here. I like to write poetry too, and rather than just reposting poetry that was inspired elsewhere I'd love to interact people here to write poetry, together.

So, with in mind, add a line, or a stanza or more.....and let's see what we can collectively create.


She came to me in a vision
The sun and moon were in a collision
Venus n' Marz were on a course
Create Good Things........
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life


    __________________
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too

    and if I ever find out
    what planet she's from
    I'm gonna get there...
    I'm gonna hand her some rum

    And then I'll teach her
    how to play gin
    And then I'll tell her
    what a state our planet is in

    I've made a vow
    I'm gonna show her how
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too

    and if I ever find out
    what planet she's from
    I'm gonna get there...
    I'm gonna hand her some rum

    And then I'll teach her
    how to play gin
    And then I'll tell her
    what a state our planet is in

    I've made a vow
    I'm gonna show her how

    She's just angel from heaven
    sent to deliver me from myself
    sent to show me the way
    to the moon, the stars and beyond

    Yet is is heart and soul that I am fond
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too

    and if I ever find out
    what planet she's from
    I'm gonna get there...
    I'm gonna hand her some rum

    And then I'll teach her
    how to play gin
    And then I'll tell her
    what a state our planet is in

    I've made a vow
    I'm gonna show her how

    She's just angel from heaven
    sent to deliver me from myself
    sent to show me the way
    to the moon, the stars and beyond

    Yet is is her heart and soul that I am fond
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too

    and if I ever find out
    what planet she's from
    I'm gonna get there...
    I'm gonna hand her some rum

    And then I'll teach her
    how to play gin
    And then I'll tell her
    what a state our planet is in

    I've made a vow
    I'm gonna show her how

    She's just angel from heaven
    sent to deliver me from myself
    sent to show me the way
    to the moon, the stars and beyond

    Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
    as bad as it can sometimes be
    the human spirit, a limitless pond

    diving deep, breath after breath
    i feel life on my skin

    The rush of blood to the head
    when we meld spirit-to-spirit
    with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
    mind to mind
    body to body
    when she is wrapped up in mine
    skin-to-skin
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    She came to me in a vision
    The sun and moon were in a collision
    Venus n' Marz were on a course

    scooping out mud, riding moon-bunny horses
    their noses were full of it, so were there ears
    but their mouths, open-empty and

    ...their minds full of delusons of grandeur

    They rode on, towards the night
    such a fierce and gruesome sight

    The stars in the heavens were all aflame
    Shooting rays of nebulous infrared light,
    black holes sucking up space
    comets racing towards planets and explode their gas
    it was all Mother's Nature's game

    The game called Life

    It has rules, barriers, and goals
    Winners and losers
    It can be filled with strife, survival of life
    It can be an island of Paradise

    This lady that came to me in a heavenly dream
    Was player's player of games
    She whispered to me softly...
    That I was a lion in her den
    and she came to life for me to tame

    yeah! She was a lioness with a tiger in her tank

    yeah! and she was an Angel too

    and if I ever find out
    what planet she's from
    I'm gonna get there...
    I'm gonna hand her some rum

    And then I'll teach her
    how to play gin
    And then I'll tell her
    what a state our planet is in

    I've made a vow
    I'm gonna show her how

    She's just angel from heaven
    sent to deliver me from myself
    sent to show me the way
    to the moon, the stars and beyond

    Yet it is her heart and soul that I am fond
    as bad as it can sometimes be
    the human spirit, a limitless pond

    diving deep, breath after breath
    i feel life on my skin

    The rush of blood to the head
    when we meld spirit-to-spirit
    with rose metals draping our heavenly bed
    mind to mind
    body to body
    when she is wrapped up in mine
    skin-to-skin

    but then!
    her b/f walked in ;)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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