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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No she doesn't, that is true. But still that has never stopped her from driving before.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna sat in the park. her legs pulled up against her body, her arms wrapped around her knees. she shivered. the branches of the trees were bare. they seemed to match her mood. she scratched the skin on her hand. it had been itchy for days and nothing she did helped. the skin was red raw from the constant contact. a dog barked nearby and she jumped at the sound. she couldn't remember how long she had been here. her clothes were damp so she had at least been here overnight.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Thinking she needed to eat she wondered what the time was. She looked over her shoulder to find the owner of the dog.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    she remembers once, davey bought home a puppy. the runt of a litter a client of his owned.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She stood up from the bench and walked in the direction the barking came from.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    she heard someone call her name.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • hrd2imgn
    hrd2imgn Southwest Burbs of Chicago Posts: 4,924
    Bessie, is that you???? asked Travis whom some describe as a redneck dressed like a huckleberry Finn wannabe.
  • Brainofdz
    Brainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Yes it's me Travis, you stupid pile of shit.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    hey guys. this story is ongoing. if you can't be bothered to read the backstory please refrain from posting. it just screws me and karma's narrative up. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    she heard someone call her name.

    Hey Anna what in godname are you doing out of bed at this unholy hour? Are you sick or something?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    she didn't want to talk to anybody. she wanted to walk away but somehow she couldn't get going. still scratching her hand absently she tried to focus. dex reached out and enveloped both her hands in one of his.

    'don't do that, you're bleeding.'

    looking closer at anna's hand dex realised he wasn't looking at scratches alone. he looked at anna.

    'anna these are cuts. what have you done to yourself?'

    she tried to pull her hand away but dex held fast. then he noticed her damp clothes.

    'have you been out here all night?'

    anna wouldn't answer his questions.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Come on Anna, you can tell me. Let me walk you home, you need to get warm.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    when she felt dex's hands on her, she pulled away from him.

    'don't touch me. don't ever touch me.'

    as she stepped back, anna tripped and fell to the ground.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Dex felt a grin on his face which he tried to hide by kneeling down. Don't be this way Anna, I'm just trying to help.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    she slapped his proffered hand away and scrambled to her feet.

    'i don't need help. and i certainly don't need it from a fuckin' junkie.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • korby
    korby Posts: 298
    im changing thi sto meatl lingo. hellbound . i paid the masters with blood and hunger.
    its ok
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ouch Anna ouch. You drive that dagger so so deep into a wound that is already sour from all the poking of they who have gone there before you.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna gave dex such a blank look of disdain, it was as if she was frozen solid inside.

    'i dont give a shit dex.'

    with that she walked past him on her way to who knows where.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh we know sweety, we know you don't give a shit. That is what you are addicted on; Being a tough lillte birdy from hell.
    And with a vaint smile he tried to forget the whole situation and that he cared how it ended, just walking straight on to Prestman street.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    dex heard a screech of tyres, as his foot touched the bitumen he turned to see anna go over the bonnet of a car. it breaked hard and anna flopped onto the street. her head smashing onto the tar.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say

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