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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    karma defect wrote:
    Well I haven't either. I don't even know if we are still together. I take it you have been to her place?

    arlo thought about what he had just said. was it really possible that nearly a fortnight had passed since he and anna's blowup? davey spoke.

    'we we're going there now and it occurred to me that it was possible she may be with you. but obviously not.'
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    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I haven't seen her since,..... well I haven't seen her.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i hate when she gets like this.'

    davey sighed heavily.

    'fuck, she could be anywhere.'
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    take a good look
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    hold my hand
    lie beside me
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    You said we, Who is the other half of we?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'gerard'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Ten minutes later as they pulled up the curb, Davey's doubts had grown. Did he really want to be part of this?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    he looked up at anna's second floor studio. and then turned to arlo.

    'were all the windows open like that last time you were here? when was that you said?'
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    take a good look
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    hold my hand
    lie beside me
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Oh I don't know, the last time I saw Anna was at my place.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    catefrances wrote:
    he looked up at anna's second floor studio. and then turned to arlo.

    'were all the windows open like that last time you were here? when was that you said?'


    Davey I have no I dea if the windows were open or closed. I had other stuff on my mind that day. Why what are you getting at?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    arlo checked himself.

    'no wait. we had a fight. i don't even know what it was about anymore. probably nothing . seems that's what they were usually about. i can't remember if the windows were open.'

    he was out of the car before davey could stop him.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey wait up don't run in there, but Arlo didn't turn around to listen.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey and gerard found arlo standing just inside the front door. it looked as if a bomb had gone off. he turned around.

    'could she be with hamish?'

    he'd seen the grafitti message hamish had left. thinking about his sister, arlo could feel the frustration start to build up inside him.

    'why would she...? what the fuck has she done here?'
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    take a good look
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Knowing that no satisfing answer would come he turned arond and sat him self down on the stairs.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey walked further into anna's studio. he'd been here before. he knew what anna was capable of. but still he didn't know where she would go. but he knew where she would end up and he didn't like it. he walked down the hall to anna's bedroom. her bed was stripped and the sheets lay in pile at the foot of the bed. he picked up a towel. it was damp.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    She must have been here recently. Davey went further into the kitchen to find a warzone of dishes and garbage.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    gerard stood in the middle of anna's workspace admiring her work. she was good. he had to admit even in the midst of all the bullshit anna was a rare find. davey turned and saw the admiration on gerard's face.

    'you have got to be shitting me gearrd. anna is missing and all you can do it admire her work. never mind the fact that she works best when she's slightly nuts. which right now strikes me as wrong. God focus here can you. we have to find anna. not some gallery space to hang her art.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Yeah, yeah, yeah, what do you have in mind than tell me? Are you now perpared to drive down to that cabin?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey threw his hands up.

    'i don't know how she would even get there, but sure why not. where else do we have to look?'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Mmmh, you are right. How would she get there? Perhaps we could see if she has borrowed a car form someone, before we drive down there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'anna doesn't have a licence.'

    both gerard and davey looked at arlo.
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    take a good look
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    lie beside me
    i just need to say

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