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  • He laughingly said; What is a sin now for a boy to visit his lady?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    anna responded with a wicked laugh of her own.

    'come on baby, you know i ain't no lady.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Well those are your words not mine, you can't hold that against me.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'oh honey. you know it's not words i want to be holding against you.'

    anna's mood swings fascinated arlo. he couldn't keep up sometimes. and this was one of those times. he wanted to talk about his brother and her sister and anna didn't seem to want to do any talking at all. and yet at his place earlier, when he went to touch her she shied away from him. and now here she was not even trying to be the least bit subtle.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • I actually wanted to talk to you, that's why I came over.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i took that rebuff and stepped back a little.


    'so what do you want to talk about then?'
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    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Oh yes this was really the way I wanted to start the conversation. I just am a bit confused by my brother.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well how did you want to start the conversation arlo? you know if you don't just come out and say stuff and choose to dither, then i'm not gonna wait for you to start whatever it is you have to say.'

    then look on arlo's face told me he was frustrated with me and with dex. i took his hand leading him tot he sofa.

    'come on, tell me what's going on.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • I am not even properly through the door Anna.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'if you come over to the sofa then you will be properly through the door won't you?'

    i looked his hand as i held it in mine and gently stroked the fingers.

    'you know you have the nicest hands.'

    i wanted to lean in and kiss him but i could see whatever was going on with dex was weighing on him.

    'come on. come and sit down with me.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • He smiled and shook his head. How about a drink sweetie.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you want to stay in and have a soda or go out and get plastered. cause you know i can go either way. except that soda thing. i don't like the bubbles.'

    i smiled to lighten what i thought could very easily turn into a heavy mood.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • I'll have tea if you have it.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'for you baby, i'd pick the leaves myself.'

    i disappeared into the kitchen tpo put the kettle on. i came back to the doorway.

    'so tell me about dex then'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
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    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • He stood up and leand against the doorpost.

    The dumb fuck got arrested for dancing, in the nude I should add. But seriously I am worried about him.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    i tried to keep my composure but well....i had to laugh. arlo didn't think it funny.

    'i'm sorry baby, but dancing naked. that's funny.'

    i wrapped my arms around him and kissed his cheek. i brushed the hair from his brow, then let him go, but left my hand resting on his hip.

    'what did the police say?'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Yes it would be funny to me as well, yet I lost my sense of humour when it comes to my brother. The police where not very amused. Apparently he was high on....on whatever. He is getting further and further away from anything constructive.
    I already lost a sister I don’t want to lose my brother as well.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'you know what? i know you want to save him but you have to leave it up to him. anything you try and do for dex he's most likely gonna resent. especially, if he doesn't want to do what you want him to.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • So I should just let him have his overdose? Because it is going that way.
    He didn't ask me for money to buy drugs directly, but he did ask me some to pay the rent, guess where his own went.
    I know I can't do much else than share my concern, but I am starting to get real scared.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'and did you end up paying his rent? cause you know if you do it once he's gonna come back and ask again and again.'
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say