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JDE-PJ
JDE-PJ Posts: 721
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
memories fading, drifting away

your smell, your voice of another day

visions of grandeur escaped my touch

all those things I wanted and craved so much

the sadness mostly gone, left with confusion

close my eyes tightly and wish this was just an illusion

smiling now as I remember the past

always knew in my gut, that it could never last

silence with no answers have taken over your part

but never forget you're forever in my heart
I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


Jason
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  • violet ray
    violet ray Posts: 502
    nice, jason
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by violet ray
    nice, jason

    thanks violet ray.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • chiquimonkey
    chiquimonkey Posts: 9,337
    quite beautiful, jason
  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by chiquimonkey
    quite beautiful, jason

    thank you chiqui.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • of_the_girl
    of_the_girl Posts: 745
    not only are your words great, but the choppy structure. the spaces between lines. perhaps symbolic of the "silence with no answers"??? well, even if the structure was an accident. i really do enjoy it. :)

    great job. :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • JDE-PJ
    JDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by of_the_girl
    not only are your words great, but the choppy structure. the spaces between lines. perhaps symbolic of the "silence with no answers"??? well, even if the structure was an accident. i really do enjoy it. :)

    great job. :)

    thank you of_the_girl.

    and yes the choppy structure was on purpose.
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason

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