for je snow

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memories fading, drifting away

your smell, your voice of another day

visions of grandeur escaped my touch

all those things I wanted and craved so much

the sadness mostly gone, left with confusion

close my eyes tightly and wish this was just an illusion

smiling now as I remember the past

always knew in my gut, that it could never last

silence with no answers have taken over your part

but never forget you're forever in my heart

violet ray

nice, jason

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Originally posted by violet ray
nice, jason

thanks violet ray.

chiquimonkey

quite beautiful, jason

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Originally posted by chiquimonkey
quite beautiful, jason

thank you chiqui.

of_the_girl

not only are your words great, but the choppy structure. the spaces between lines. perhaps symbolic of the "silence with no answers"??? well, even if the structure was an accident. i really do enjoy it.

great job.

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Originally posted by of_the_girl
not only are your words great, but the choppy structure. the spaces between lines. perhaps symbolic of the "silence with no answers"??? well, even if the structure was an accident. i really do enjoy it.

great job.

thank you of_the_girl.

and yes the choppy structure was on purpose.