Moonlight Dip

Being Enlightened
Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The mask of night,
broken by beams
of her sweet light,
she tenderly
touches the tides
and their glistening,
and gentle rocking
is only broken
by my bare-skinned
strides into her drink.
Mmm, she holds me,
she folds me,
makes me sing
to my sisters,
makes me call,
"Please,
come to me!"
A giggle
and a twirl,
another girl,
enters her calm
and drinks
of the divine.
Entwined,
and at peace,
they seek
the last,
ask her to cast
off her fears,
"Come,
be near."
A splash
and a whirl,
yet another girl,
slips through
and the circle's
complete.
The mask of night,
broken by beams
of their sweet light,
spirits letting be,
souls running free,
dipping in the moonlight.

:)



(fer civ_eng_girl & Irisheyes--luv to my girls!!!!! :D)
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    this is BEAUTIFUL :D:D:D:D
  • civ_eng_girl
    civ_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    oh, B.E.!!! That's so beautiful :D:D:D

    you've brought a big smile to my otherwise exhausted 'morning after'... :)

    luv you too! :p
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • Irisheyes
    Irisheyes Posts: 17
    Great poem B.E love it....... ((hugs))
  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744
    ......mmmm SPLASH!!!...I'm in, bare-skinned too

    3 skinny dippin' chicks

    Life doesn't get much better n' this

    pure bliss, purely divine

    swimming bare-skiinned in the moonlight

    giggling glistening magic in the night

    as I hear your angelic voice singing "please come to me"

    I do ;)
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • Irisheyes
    Irisheyes Posts: 17
    Hmmm HoleyG were u there?......... i thought someone was watching.

    I feel so.................... violated.... *shiver*
  • Holey Ghost
    Holey Ghost Posts: 744
    in spirit definitely.....

    never feel violated by me

    I'm as free and natural as the sea

    I'm not scary, but friendly as the gentle breeze

    blowing thru the trees, and as loving as the morning sun

    and as passsionate as the midnight moon's reflections across the water

    No need to *shiver*.....as my presence should only inspire bare-skinned girls, to *quiver*
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • newagehippie
    newagehippie Posts: 749
    *kicks self*

    :o
    Cheers,
    NEWAGEHIPPIE

    Keep your eyes open, eventually something will happen....
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Awww, danka Pasta! Girl, I wish you were there too! :)

    civvy and Irish, we do eeet again soon, yah? :D

    :D H.G., I could feel da breeze between my knees, by jeez! Dat wuz you?? :p;)

    And you, Mister newagehippie...well...:D, 3 fine, young maidens glistening in the moonlit water and YOU missed it! ;) Sucks to be you! :p:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    Like mother ocean calling 3 daughters? I like the flowings back and forth like the waves, and curves.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • C3
    C3 Posts: 23
    I really like this poem. It is almost tangible. I could nearly feel the experience of the water. Great stuff... I got chills
    I am lost, I'm no guide
    but I'm by your side.
  • civ_eng_girl
    civ_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    a little bump for my favorite poem ever written, and the one year anniversary of 'the dip'...

    love to my girls! :D
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Lovely, very lovely.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • burtschips
    burtschips Posts: 734
    ohh, good call civ eng...
    Salut baloo
  • bostonlou
    bostonlou Posts: 2,849
    I don't skinny dip........

    I chunky dunk.

    :)
    Don't Believe Everything You Think
  • civ_eng_girl
    civ_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    bostonlou wrote:
    I don't skinny dip........

    I chunky dunk.

    :)

    hey! i resemble that remark.... :p
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~
  • bostonlou
    bostonlou Posts: 2,849
    civ_eng_girl wrote:
    hey! i resemble that remark.... :p


    as do i


    FLY FAT ASS!!!! FLY!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Don't Believe Everything You Think
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    civ_eng_girl wrote:
    a little bump for my favorite poem ever written, and the one year anniversary of 'the dip'...

    love to my girls! :D

    :) Awww {{{civvy}}} :) Thank you sweetheart!

    Heh heh...chunky dunk!!! KERPLUNK!!! :p Hee Hee!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • civ_eng_girl
    civ_eng_girl Posts: 2,001
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :) Awww {{{civvy}}} :) Thank you sweetheart!

    Heh heh...chunky dunk!!! KERPLUNK!!! :p Hee Hee!

    it's official - you can make poetry out of anything... :)
    ~~*~~ ...i surfaced and all of my being was enlightend... ~~*~~

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