someone gimme a hand with this...

You want for it to snow, you want the chill
to glaze our windowframe, to make the moon
seem gleaming cold upon our windowsill
and have us cuddling for warmth. Yes, soon
I'll leave the heat down low as good excuse
to lay down next to you, to feel your head
upon my shoulder. Let the night's obtuse
silent dark allow love's flow to spread.

Spot In The Sky wrote:

ive been so uninspired lately, havent written something in over a month now- so ive got an idea for something, but i dont know where to go with it- so if someone else wants to run with it, be my guest, or just give me something to start off...

ill leave the heat on low so i have an excuse to lay down next to you

...ok thats all i got so far, i just like the way it sounds, advice anyone?!

Kev

Hey Spot In The Sky,
I'm not going to write a poem in response, but give you what that line did for my imagination. As soon as I read it it felt like the couple had lost something in their relationship. The narrator seems to be trying to find a way to get it back. The sadness of the line alone screams to say that the poem should end in the same sadness. Anyway there is my thoughts. Want to see what you come up with.