Poems by PastaNazi

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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    bambiiiiiii :)


    HI! :D



    (this bump's for anOmis who said... keep 'em coming :) y'all's encouragement rawks)


    :D
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    PastaNazi is the schizzle fo' rizzle, yo. :)
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by suede
    PastaNazi is the schizzle fo' rizzle, yo. :)

    Couldn't have said it better myself! :D

    And that Yellow character ain't so bad neither! :p:D

    Oh, and BTW, "shit" is da shit, little momma!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thank you my dearies... :)


    :D:D:D:D
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    :) You're welcome, goodly Pasta;
    You make the day go faster.:)
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    (so... i'm doing competetive performace poetry in 13 days... i have to memorize three 3-minute pieces and get the whole visual expression together....

    dude, that's crazy insane! i give you all the credit for being able to remember even one 3-minute piece....way to go! are there any that allow you to refer to paper? my memory sucks.
    are there any of these competetive performances held in michigan? this is totally cool. keep it up, kid-o!
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    ...i'm catching up, been away for awhile. this one is Beautiful.

    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    no? well that's okay
    i wasn't talking anyway

    i wasn't talking anyway
    except to say

    except to say that i did love you

    i know i did, i remember baking cookies and noting which shoes looked good on you

    i remember walking through isles upon isles of men's shirts and telling saleswomen what fantastic legs you had...

    so give me the shorter shorts

    i remember holding your head to my chest and making my heart beat louder so you would feel me feeling your pain

    i remember trying

    i remember trying to hoist one hundred and ninety pounds and carry you to bed so you wouldn't feel left out
    and hooking my hand into the bend of your elbow as we walked through town...






    dhnt dhnt dhnt dhnt dhnt.... so.... is this thing on?
    no? well that's okay.
    i wasn't talking anyway.

    i wasn't talking anyway
    except to say

    except to say that i did love you.

    i remember crying under crosses for you to save me
    and for you to let me save you (kcufer)

    i remember when all words flew like wine from our lips, our fingertips sore with all the click, click, click, click.

    i remember the face i thought you were making
    and the way i thought you sat on your couch
    and the way we'd always speak in metaphors
    taking special note of all the cosmic bindings between the you and i





    yeah... so...

    dhnt dhnt dhnt....is this thing on?
    no? well, that's okay...
    i wasn't talking anyway
    i wasn't talking anyway
    except to say

    except to say

    i don't believe love goes away,
    for me it doesn't anyway
    and maybe,
    maybe soon someday
    i'll take my mirror to Bombay
    and love it in an alleyway
    our malaise held fast in sway
    and maybe She wont float away
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    thank you so much, suede :)
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    you dirty, dirty whore ;)
    would you like another banana? :D
    ...shameless indeed! lol
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    OR BANANAS!!!

    ie.

    Swallowed

    Look so perfect
    I remove your covering
    Naked for all to see
    Hold you in my hand
    Even more enticing
    Lick my lips with anticipation
    Open my mouth
    Take you in
    So smooth on my tongue
    A mouth full of sweet, sticky goodness
    I swallow you down
    Bit by bit
    Inch by inch
    Until you are completely consumed




    And then throw away the peel

    :p

    Shameless, I am, just shameless! :D

    And yes, fins/cass/dyao/phish do need to expose their brilliant and lovely minds for discussion on this topic, I SO agree! :)
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    that's just banana cruelty :D
    refer to the previous post for the proper technique ;)
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    i like how when you squish a banana in the peel really hard, it oozes out all mashed from the splits in the seams...feels nice in the hand
  • suede
    suede Posts: 247
    okay...i officially want to get "banana cruelty" put on a t-shirt! :D
  • Nothingbetter
    Nothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Very cool stuff. Thanks for sharing.
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    share i must...
    thank you for reading :)
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    When I walk three miles out to Horningsea
    and enter through the gentle path that leads
    me through across some farmland, I can see
    in my mind's eye how all this sky that bleeds
    gold upon the flatlands seems to be
    doubled with the view you note each day
    when you rise early: broad light making free
    with ground of earthy beige. Dreams make a play
    upon my image of the desert scene
    you see each day: I give your ground some new
    shoots springing from a water stream; bright green
    rushes quiver, gorgeously. Your view
    I would make lifelush without end.
    May these words green your desert now, my friend.

    :)
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    my goodness, finsbury!

    I AM TOUCHED!

    honestly...


    what an amazing poem.... thank you so very much...



    i think i need a tissue *sniff*



    wowsers
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    there is joy and there is green
    in the smallest plants you've ever seen
    across the yawning pond

    whole microcosms live alight
    on dew in sunburnt air
    on red sand rock
    and under lizard feet
    (that might be green)
    that seek a shade in which to rest

    and yet, we daily pray for rain
    for springs to spring
    and water find
    our crevices
    our rushes shake and grow
    while Nature hums "anomaly"

    a tiny tune upon her mouth

    "anomaly, anomaly,
    just wait ten minutes and you'll see,
    your dead rock garden grow
    you wouldn't, but you now must know
    a wish in friendship has been sown
    in air across the sea-ee!"


    :)
  • FancyFacade
    FancyFacade Posts: 330
    cool--its only poetry but i like it--like it
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Originally posted by PastaNazi
    there is joy and there is green
    in the smallest plants you've ever seen
    across the yawning pond

    whole microcosms live alight
    on dew in sunburnt air
    on red sand rock
    and under lizard feet
    (that might be green)
    that seek a shade in which to rest

    and yet, we daily pray for rain
    for springs to spring
    and water find
    our crevices
    our rushes shake and grow
    while Nature hums "anomaly"

    a tiny tune upon her mouth

    "anomaly, anomaly,
    just wait ten minutes and you'll see,
    your dead rock garden grow
    you wouldn't, but you now must know
    a wish in friendship has been sown
    in air across the sea-ee!"


    :)

    For life, girl, for life. Good friend.

    :)
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    :D absolutely :D
  • EvilToasterElf
    EvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    Go all the way back in the thread to this

    It only takes a hundred years for glass to gain hips.


    you wrote an entire poem which you didn't like, and I agree I don't like it either, but you left yourself with this piece of gold, and if that's all you got out of that poem it's enough, take this gem somewhere else, make it the crown jewel of a new reign.

    This is a fresh inventive line, and an awesome opener for another poem.

    Go!

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