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  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Apron-string clutcher
    inherits ninety acres
    of grey, barren soil
  • even flow?
    even flow? Posts: 8,066
    my nikes just broke a lace
    looks like another lost medal
    think I'll have a smoke
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I prefer it when
    there's somebody to fight with
    but then, that's just me

    :D
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    even flow? wrote:
    my nikes just broke a lace
    looks like another lost medal
    think I'll have a smoke
    Very cute :-)
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    I prefer it when
    there's somebody to fight with
    but then, that's just me

    :D
    during a thunderstorm
    branches fell from two trees
    firewood
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Evil Kenevil
    works down our high street as a
    pizza courier
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    and trees once lush
    shed brittle leaves
    collage
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    charles wrote:
    Pale light
    warms the dead leafs
    silence
    This is beautiful. I haven't read one like this in a long time.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    pale
    the first chill
    of an autumn sunset
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Red finch, apple branch
    One puffed up, one drawn tight
    Both against the cold.
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    PastaNazi wrote:
    Red finch, apple branch
    One puffed up, one drawn tight
    Both against the cold.
    unfulfilled
    bird leans against
    branch shadows
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    charles wrote:
    Bare branches
    Sleeping colors
    Chill
    closed eyes
    a fallen leaf
    covered in night
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Blind Gloucester falls
    arms out to vengeful gods
    cursing loyal sons
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    Shakespeare rails
    through centuries
    what a joke
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    ISN wrote:
    Shakespeare rails
    through centuries
    what a joke
    a worn page
    with college level notes
    smiling eyes
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,376
    first frost
    floating breath
    to the side of the bird
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    I like it....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN
    ISN Posts: 1,700
    the one above that one.....hehehehehehe....mea culpa
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    A revelation
    occurs to me: you see
    I can't do haiku
  • FinsburyParkCarrots
    FinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    And another thing:
    Line two of my last poem
    lacks a syllable