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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    dyna2 wrote:
    tortured chiseled stone,
    images of lives undone,
    iron wrought, sung low

    these notes upon wind,
    philosophy carries in
    magenta dream, pumice sin,
    sudden gait, lost kin;

    cracked, eroded cape
    storms tempestuous with taste
    worn out minds in haste...

    tortured chiseled stone
    bas-relief carved out alone:
    iron wrought, sung low.


    Reminds me of some of Geoffrey Hill's poetry. Good.
  • a country doctora country doctor Posts: 145
    is the hand of the farmer cold
    it lies chopped of in the woods
    BANZÄÄÄ

    When he was six, he believed that the moon overhead followed him
    By nine, he deciphered the illusion, trading magic for fact, no trade-backs
    So this is what it's like to be an adult?
    If he only knew now what he knew then
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    evergreen branches
    no space
    between the lines
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Spaces are texts
    interrogating silence
    in our history
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Hobson's Brook, black swan
    bankside, preening breast feathers
    Vanity ripples
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    young tree
    bouncing branches
    lovesick
    young tree
    through this first winter storm
    bends recovers bends
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Spaces are texts
    interrogating silence
    in our history
    silence while
    a child sleeps
    does not exist?
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Hobson's Brook, black swan
    bankside, preening breast feathers
    Vanity ripples
    a crowd of ducks
    adopt a swan
    shaded by yellowing trees
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Bibliobella wrote:
    silence while
    a child sleeps
    does not exist?

    Empire erases
    old souls to call colonies
    'promising children'
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    Empire erases
    old souls to call colonies
    'promising children'
    'promising children'
    throw tantrums
    including tea parties
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    cup too full
    cannot be drank
    without spilling
    a cup is only too full
    if it spills
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    Bibliobella wrote:
    'promising children'
    throw tantrums
    including tea parties

    I like that one. :)
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    old tree
    thick skin
    many winters
    the last winter
    chopped as firewood
    the warmest solstice
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    lamplight
    between evergreen branches
    winter fog
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    burnt out forest
    pouring ashes
    sky is crying

    -sorry, feel like a mad dog right now
    sky is crying
    and the music
    became blues
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    smoky dawn
    emerging through the ashes
    a mouse
    thunderstorm
    and a mouse runs by
    shaking
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    one drop
    sky diving eagle
    on a prey
    storm
    nervous mouse placid mouse
    get wet all the same
    the smooth flight of wings
    and a paint brush stroke
    slow in red
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    i loved the feeling of sudden danger in that one, one movement, and over...

    shapeless shadow
    subtle scent of fog
    death has many ways
    ---
    Grazie!

    a park bench
    covered in fog
    unhoed dirt beneath the shadow
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    same tramp on the bench
    waiting for the spring
    few of us notice
    but we notice
    the first day of spring
    the many times
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    July park dawning
    warm cider can by the bench
    below a dry mouth
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    July park dawning
    warm cider can by the bench
    below a dry mouth
    winter dawn
    wrapped in tattered blanket
    Inaguration Day
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • sicnevolsicnevol Posts: 180
    I hate you so much
    to much pain has been caused
    I hate you very much
    That's two things we've got, Tape and Time.
  • PJGirl2004PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    My contribution to the Haiku thread......


    The broken arrow
    Pierced raw heart and emotion
    The dying was slow
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    PJGirl2004 wrote:
    My contribution to the Haiku thread......


    The broken arrow
    Pierced raw heart and emotion
    The dying was slow
    slow trickle of blood
    the puddle
    stops moving
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    fool lightens a match
    in the night, he
    looks for the one he lost...
    fool with a match
    shows
    fear of the dark
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • PJGirl2004PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    Sun sets on remains
    Leaving salty tears behind
    An angel goes Home
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    PJGirl2004 wrote:
    Sun sets on remains
    Leaving salty tears behind
    An angel goes Home
    Angels
    sprinkle salt in spaghetti sauce
    home cooked meal
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    charles wrote:
    cornflake crack
    under my bare feet
    children
    cereal regurgitated
    on my shirt
    children
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    wasp conspiracies
    buzz all around a summer
    bin laden with bush
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,265
    FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:
    wasp conspiracies
    buzz all around a summer
    bin laden with bush
    but the summer is gone
    and still
    and still
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
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