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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey looked at gerard like he'd lost his mind.

    'why on earth do you think anna would go up to the cabin? did you even bother to knock on her door?'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Biting his lip trying to recall if he did he concluded that he probable didn't. Well the girl downstairs seemed to think she hadn't been home in a few days.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • pearlposterfan
    pearlposterfan Posts: 102
    She was a whore, lost, stuck in a maze.
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    karma defect wrote:
    Biting his lip trying to recall if he did he concluded that he probable didn't. Well the girl downstairs seemed to think she hadn't been home in a few days.

    'the girl downstairs gerard? i didn't even know there was a girl downstairs. you're dealing with anna here, not some person whose life is a buttondown advertisement for conservatism.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well it isn't that unlogical. She's not picking up her phone, she hasn't for days. Is it that strange to think so might not be home?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey let out a sigh.

    'how long have you known anna, gerard? five, six years? i know you've known her longer than i have. and in all that time you've never known her to hide out in her own place. is that what you'ae telling me? you've never known her to ignore everyone around her so she can do god knows what to herself. i would bet my life when we go over there we'll find her curled up in a ball in her kitchen, drunk as a fuckin' skunk.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well no need to hassle me Davey. Come on someone says to me I think she left confirms my own idea so I came here. Is that so weird?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i'm not going to stand here bitching back and forth like this. why didn't you go to arlo? i hate this gerard. i hate that everytime something goes awry with anna i am who people come to. i am not her lover anymore and i sure as hell don't feel like being her friend.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    If you would to congratulating yourself on how well you know Anna, you might recall me asking for an adress. That is the reason I came here. It has nothing to do with something going wrong or me wanting you to fix it. So please stop that pitty trip of yours and give me the adress so I don't have to come back might she actually not be home.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'there is no address. it's on one of those forestry service roads near dalloway lake. i'll have to come with you.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    OK, but let me first check if it is actually necessary, not that I don't enjoy a good roadtrip.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    the incredulous look on davey's face was something gerard should have expected.

    'what! wait wait. you stood there and gave some song and dance about taking the word of a fucking stranger and now you're gonna check if anna is actually home. but you wouldn't take my word? what the hell is that gerard?'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Why do you think I am going back there Davey? Might it be because you suggested it?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey put down the camera he was holding. with the mood he was in, it wouldn't be beyond him to throw it in frustration.


    'well shit gerard. i don't know. you didn't seem all that keen when i first mentioned it.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Well stop acting like an asshole and maybe you'll get a different responce next time. I'll be of now I don't think I can handle more of your loveliness of today. Goodbye.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • Nossie
    Nossie Adelaide, Australia Posts: 1,039
    karma defect wrote:
    Well stop acting like an asshole and maybe you'll get a different responce next time. I'll be of now I don't think I can handle more of your loveliness of today. Goodbye.


    And with that, she rode off into the sunset... not turning around to see if he was still looking...
    When you're curious, you find lots of interesting things to do...


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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    karma defect wrote:
    Well stop acting like an asshole and maybe you'll get a different responce next time. I'll be of now I don't think I can handle more of your loveliness of today. Goodbye.


    'just wait gerard.'

    davey sighed.

    'you know, i thought breaking up with anna would alleviate this bullshit. but it hasn't. everytime something goes wrong, you all come to me as if i have the answers. and i don't. i'm trying my hardest to get over her and it's just not working.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    I know Davey, it wasn't fair to come to you. I wouldn't have done so, had it not been for the adress that I thought I needed. Sorry.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'well why don't we go find arlo and see what the hell has happened between them that has caused this apparent disappearance? if in fact that's the case. hopefully we're all freaking out for no reason and she'll be with him.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Let me go to her place first. And you might do better not going with me. Like you said you need to get along with things.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»

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