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  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey backed off a little.

    'i'm sorry. i shouldn't have grabbed you like that.'

    he sighed and rested his hands on his hips.

    'dex called me and he sounded like he was high. i mean really high. it just gave me a bad feeling and i thought maybe he..... i don't know..... he couldn't even tell me if isabelle was with him.'
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    i just need to say
  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    Hey just sounded really weird not in the normal stoned way.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'i don't know what to tell you davey. i don't know where dex lives. just come in and wait for arlo. he won't be too much longer i imagine.'

    anna stood aside to allow davey entry into arlo's place. he hesitated.

    'i'm not gonna bite you.'
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  • karma defect
    karma defect Posts: 5,483
    No I reckon you won't, but I am afraid it might be too late.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'there's nothing you can do until arlo gets back.'

    the phone rang. anna looked into the apartment and then back at davey.

    'i got to take this. come in if you want.'

    anna left davey standing and went to answer the phone. when davey heard her speak curiosity go the better of him.

    'oh thank goodness. you know davey's here looking for him. said he was talking to him earlier. he was quite concerned...yeah yeah i'll tell him..okay i'll see you then.'

    when anna hung the phone up she turned and found davey standing right behind her.
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • What happened? He is alright, isn't he?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'dex is fine. well as fine as he ever is. you're too much of an old woman sometimes davey.'
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  • No he was really weird. Should I have ignored that feeling?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    not wanting to get into any kind of debate with davey, anna walked away. for the second time he grabbed her.

    'don't walk away from me anna. i wasn't imagining the situation dex was in.'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Well he's alright, so you can let go of my arm.

    He is just been arrested, that is all.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey self consciously dropped his arm to his side.

    'and how about you anna? are you doing alright?'
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    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • I get by.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'just get by. what you're going through is horrendous anna. you shouldn't be just getting by. did you talk with arlo?'
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Not that it is any of your business, however sweet it is that you care, but yes I sort of did.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey shook his head.

    'i should have known better. you know anna, i try to be your friend. i try to forget i still love you when you come to me with stuff instead of going to your lover and all i get is slapped in the face. i just can't do it anymore. you tire me out and i've had it. just tell arlo i'll talk to him later.'

    davey started towards the door.
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    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • What did I say?
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    'nothing. just forget it anna. i've got to go'

    davey managed to make it almost to the lobby before he leant against the wall, thinking how much he missed having anna in his life as a partner. he shook it off as just feeling sorry for himself. but then from what he had seen and been told of arlo and anna, it didn't appear that their union was any great love affair. of course he couldn't look at it objectively. he was too close to anna.
    davey pushed himself off the wall, and shoving his hands in his pockets went out into the street.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • Just when he was about to turn the corner he heard his name being called. What he had hoped for some moments ago happened now that he didn't want it any more.

    Hey wait up Davey!
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • catefrances
    catefrances Posts: 29,003
    davey tried to ignore anna. but it was never an easy thing to do.

    'davey, please.'

    he didn't stop until her hand upon his arm made it necessary.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • What? Anna What do you want? I can't do this now.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»