a poem

OlDiamondback
OlDiamondback Posts: 100
edited December 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In the sterile room
of an old hotel
she wipes her ass
violently,
violently,
to remove the stain
of an oblivious moment.
As the blood drips down
her soul finds wings.
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  • grooveamatic
    grooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    dirty. visceral. quite real and quite shocking. effective. wow.
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  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,390
    in an old hotel
    where her aunt died
    pool of blood
    the "doctor" never found
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • Pearl_Jam_Necklace
    Pearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    i couldnt find any words but its good so i had to say something
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....

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