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Swallowed

Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Look so perfect
I remove your covering
Naked for all to see
Hold you in my hand
Even more enticing
Lick my lips with anticipation
Open my mouth
Take you in
So smooth on my tongue
A mouth full of sweet, sticky goodness
I swallow you down
Bit by bit
Inch by inch
Until you are completely consumed




And then throw away the peel
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    You fucking pervert..............no wait it all ends with a banana. You are not a fucking pervert after all!!! Sorry!!!
    You've changed your place in this world!
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    Originally posted by even flow?
    You fucking pervert..............no wait it all ends with a banana. You are not a fucking pervert after all!!! Sorry!!!


    No appologies are necessary!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    Next time spit ;)
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    Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Next time spit ;)

    Spit first - then swallow.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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    I'm eating a banana right now
    mmmmmmmmmmmmm! Tasty!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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