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My Calm Blue Sky

reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
edited September 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Questioning your beliefs,
are we right in what ideas we have formed?
or is that the beauty of life,
to grow and learn the errors of your ways?
I see a blue sky,
and the calm feeling it brings me soothes my soul
to know I'm still in love,
a warm feeling that I can not have enough of

lots of pre emptive opinions I created
when I was younger
they were mostly defence mechanisims
designed to keep people out
till the right one came along
now I'm there in full happiness
I'll make changes to what I believe
sacrifice those opinions that I no longer need

For now I know me and you are here for the long haul
I will be your shoulder to cry on
I will do my best to give you all you need
be a father to your children
be a lover to your desires
and as long as your here for me to
You'll be the blue sky every morning
that I need to see me through
Can not be arsed with life no more.
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Comments

  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Very sweet, reeferchiefer. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DharmaBum07DharmaBum07 Posts: 7
    I'm digging what you have to say, the meaning of it. Honestly though, I think that rather than make a poem out of this (the thoughts and words you've drafted), I would put it into a loose prose from. Like a spontaneous prose type of deal. You have some good stuff here and I think just writing it down normally, without trying to put it into poetry is most fitting.

    I really like the first stanza by the way. I feel its an accurate assessment of life. We think thoughts, we grow, our thoughts change. Its not a bad thing, its beautiful. Just like ya said.

    Btw, nice sig.

    Arms that chain, Eyes that lied. Break on through to the other side!
  • #X.#X. Posts: 142
    Beautiful End!
    "The Poet is a madman lost in adventure."
    -Paul Verlaine-

    "With me poetry has not been a purpose, but a passion."
    -Edgar Poe-
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    sometimes i read something and get inspired to pray a blast of healing throughout the world

    thanks for making me feel that way
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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