My Calm Blue Sky

reeferchief

Questioning your beliefs,
are we right in what ideas we have formed?
or is that the beauty of life,
to grow and learn the errors of your ways?
I see a blue sky,
and the calm feeling it brings me soothes my soul
to know I'm still in love,
a warm feeling that I can not have enough of

lots of pre emptive opinions I created
when I was younger
they were mostly defence mechanisims
designed to keep people out
till the right one came along
now I'm there in full happiness
I'll make changes to what I believe
sacrifice those opinions that I no longer need

For now I know me and you are here for the long haul
I will be your shoulder to cry on
I will do my best to give you all you need
be a father to your children
be a lover to your desires
and as long as your here for me to
You'll be the blue sky every morning
that I need to see me through

Being Enlightened

Very sweet, reeferchiefer.

DharmaBum07

I'm digging what you have to say, the meaning of it. Honestly though, I think that rather than make a poem out of this (the thoughts and words you've drafted), I would put it into a loose prose from. Like a spontaneous prose type of deal. You have some good stuff here and I think just writing it down normally, without trying to put it into poetry is most fitting.

I really like the first stanza by the way. I feel its an accurate assessment of life. We think thoughts, we grow, our thoughts change. Its not a bad thing, its beautiful. Just like ya said.

Btw, nice sig.

Arms that chain, Eyes that lied. Break on through to the other side!

#X.

Beautiful End!

deadnote

sometimes i read something and get inspired to pray a blast of healing throughout the world

thanks for making me feel that way