waiting

deadnote
deadnote Posts: 1,678
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
impatience is bugging me
love is what i strive for
wondering why it has to be this way
i will never hate anyone
i will never hurt anyone
whatever i go through
and whatever i dont understand
i will collapse on the stairway
and i will cry in public
and i will bleed all over the floor
before i ever hurt you
set your laughter free

dreamer in my dream

we got the guns

i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i found a window no one ever seen before
    within this view i feel the spirit of me
    and the punk sound of children releasing
    has me finding a home again

    although i know that my attempts at poetry
    they fail miserably
    maybe you could understand
    where i belong

    just waiting and waiting wondering why
    why why why why why why why why
    why why why why why why why why
    why why why why why why why why
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    west coast nirvana
    all across the world
    sound i wanna learn
    keep my secrets here

    now why i gotta be treated like this
    and why cant we just be friends
    i already changed my name in honor of you
    rush rush rush rush rush rush

    give me my past due
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    hi everyone im hopin this thread gets deleted somehow

    love you all

    Mr. Edit
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • coachchris
    coachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Here's hoping it doesn't get deleted...I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing!!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Yeah, coachchris, I'm with ya! :)

    deadnote, I like the first installment-"waiting", very much. I was all WOW, especially for those last 4 lines. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i know i love your comfort but in all honesty lets be true
    this one is better off deleted before more read it

    so lets all hold hands
    and fall together to a spiritual land
    where love does break our fall

    and this post gets deleted

    except for you two
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :) It's 2 against 1, deadnote! :) I don't know why you want it deleted, but if that's what you want, just ask the mods to take it down.

    You're just sharing some thoughts and feelings, what's wrong with that? Maybe you'll inspire someone else to pick up a pen or share something they've been weary to share...why delete it?
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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