waiting

deadnote

impatience is bugging me
love is what i strive for
wondering why it has to be this way
i will never hate anyone
i will never hurt anyone
whatever i go through
and whatever i dont understand
i will collapse on the stairway
and i will cry in public
and i will bleed all over the floor
before i ever hurt you

deadnote

i found a window no one ever seen before
within this view i feel the spirit of me
and the punk sound of children releasing
has me finding a home again

although i know that my attempts at poetry
they fail miserably
maybe you could understand
where i belong

just waiting and waiting wondering why
why why why why why why why why
why why why why why why why why
why why why why why why why why

deadnote

west coast nirvana
all across the world
sound i wanna learn
keep my secrets here

now why i gotta be treated like this
and why cant we just be friends
i already changed my name in honor of you
rush rush rush rush rush rush

give me my past due

deadnote

hi everyone im hopin this thread gets deleted somehow

love you all

Mr. Edit

coachchris

Here's hoping it doesn't get deleted...I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing!!

Being Enlightened

Yeah, coachchris, I'm with ya!

deadnote, I like the first installment-"waiting", very much. I was all WOW, especially for those last 4 lines.

deadnote

i know i love your comfort but in all honesty lets be true
this one is better off deleted before more read it

so lets all hold hands
and fall together to a spiritual land
where love does break our fall

and this post gets deleted

except for you two

Being Enlightened

It's 2 against 1, deadnote! I don't know why you want it deleted, but if that's what you want, just ask the mods to take it down.

You're just sharing some thoughts and feelings, what's wrong with that? Maybe you'll inspire someone else to pick up a pen or share something they've been weary to share...why delete it?