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  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    But I finally figured out Pink Floyd's The Wall !!!
    I amtalking to the fucking wall
    The Wall is fascism or some type of domination, fuck yeah! For 20 years I thought it was the heart, and yeah, some part of the wall I still believe is the heart...

    p.s. the Avocado Highway rocks!

    Death to Exxon, you motherfuckers!
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    i love my husband because I am runnin' around the apt. screamin I'm outta my mind, I'm outta my mind, yellin' old obsessions about Pink Floyd and he just laughs and watches me post, no really he just reads Spin mag...
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    Have declared Class Warfare on us little people'
    watch your backs
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    Eye contact
    is made while
    I drive by
    in my near empty
    dusty mercurial chariot
    I flip the illegals
    waiting patiently
    outside of a Home Depot parking lot
    the peace sign

    Hearing aid
    is an AT@T customer service representitive
    laughing at my combative paranoid drunken barrage
    of complaints and questions regarding federal surcharges on my bill
    and whom I am dialing, Hey, any privacy, et al
    I say this is Party Line Piracy...
  • john girl wrote:
    Eye contact
    is made while
    I drive by
    in my near empty
    dusty mercurial chariot
    I flip the illegals
    waiting patiently
    outside of a Home Depot parking lot
    the peace sign

    Hearing aid
    is an AT@T customer service representitive
    laughing at my combative paranoid drunken barrage
    of complaints and questions regarding federal surcharges on my bill
    and whom I am dialing, Hey, any privacy, et al
    I say this is Party Line Piracy...

    johngirl, that 2nd stanza kicks! :)

    Previously you were talking to The Wall...now, I thought we saw it fall but it didn't fall at all, that wall...they just picked up the bricks, you see, they're real slick (the pricks!!!) and carried them to another town, as we rejoiced at it coming down. The news media, you see, is selling the stories they want you to believe but more and more the holes are showing, more and more, the lies are growing and the people are waking up and knowing that there's something amiss, let's hope and let's wish something's done before it's our last kiss! ;)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • omg... it has been ages

    honestly, $ + technical problems = depression = poetry decompression for me
    attempting submissions

    a Summer of Kabuki

    ...recent dreams
    3 nights ago
    that "the Jim M." gave me a private concert in a private club
    he's on the mike solo, singing The End...

    2 nights ago
    I and my daughter are visiting strangers closets, (3 to be exact), looking for luggage so as to pack up with our clothing, meanwhile, I have 2 tix to Paris in which I am holding and I am calling the airport apoligizing to daughter and airline from each closet to delay our flight...hmm



    PS! PJ! loved seeing them live in SD this last JULY Eddie and I were on the wine wavelength COOL my 1st PJ show...

    LONG LIVE TRESTLES
    big waves baby
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    2 marguerita's an 3 shots of tequila and 40, thought for sure i was a goner before today

    ain't nothing inspiriring to write about lately,
    is everbody dead ?
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    no one gives a shit
    don't you get it about
    politics
    you bitch
    about anorexia

    nothing
    gets
    something
    at least the
    real vote
    regards
    done I care
    these
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    can't you finish any thought wtihout f'n it up?
  • john girl
    john girl Posts: 308
    I Care About These About These ,our Votes, Dammit!!!
    Majority Rules