some time to do rewrites

john girl wrote:

Why can't somebody airdrop or truck or boat some food and bottled water into New Orleans!



Labeled Fancy

I see how it is
black steeping
oolongs pensive service
poured in rusted cups
this is comraderie
sulking in its tipped colors
imperious colors, that are red leaves
and someday recollections
of apathy
in any observable sunset
to fancy, this la
cause it can run combatants
blossomed and barren
of country elected complacency
a sunset, had it resembled
a darkest dry cloud
swallowing all the blue jazz
and sunny disposition
into wholly shaken sadness
like the eight seas
like the eight seated
are eight loaded guns of piping opposition
with the slip pf the finger
ham radio operator reads
clearance
and fire remisses
a strain that has drawn it
down to despotic
turning to an angry weather
beating it into my head
open eyes on sunset
toward its fallen west
observable in two seas
of neoconquistadors
I want to lisp
as if I were those words
off Brando's lips the logistics of
breaking on the edge
I put the flowering graveyards
of revolution to your head...

Michelle Raine

Dreams of Red wrote:

it's too bad i'm taken.. i love Tea!!!