A Hug

Being Enlightened
Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A warm smile
Arms open wide
Awaiting myself
Move together
Our heads on eachothers shoulders
Arms encircling one another
Feeling eachothers warmth
Exchanging so very much
Without even so much as a word
Oh so comforting
Oh so welcomed
Wish we could all feel this
Forever
Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    This makes me want to write about a hug in the nonphysical sense...
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    This makes me want to write about a hug in the nonphysical sense...

    :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened

    Wish we could all feel this
    Forever


    i do too.

    but if wishing we all could feel this way forever is too big a wish to wish for......then i certainly hope that B.E. feels this way forever.

    :)
  • even flow?
    even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Originally posted by coleen
    i do too.

    but if wishing we all could feel this way forever is too big a wish to wish for......then i certainly hope that B.E. feels this way forever.

    :)

    I'm sure B.E. will!!!
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by coleen
    i do too.

    but if wishing we all could feel this way forever is too big a wish to wish for......then i certainly hope that B.E. feels this way forever.

    :)

    Thanks sweet pea! And right back at ya! :D

    Yeah, it's a bit of a big wish but WTF, a girl can dream can't she!? :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Yeah, it's a bit of a big wish but WTF, a girl can dream can't she!? :)

    forever and always....where would we be without our dreams?
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Thanks sweet pea! And right back at ya! :D

    Yeah, it's a bit of a big wish but WTF, a girl can dream can't she!? :)

    I hear ya... dreaming is as close to a threeway as I'll ever get... hold on to your dreams!
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  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    here goes Being...its an attempt so that you start in on mine too, but maybe try it this way...

    To Hug

    To give a warm smile
    with arms open wide,
    awaiting movement,
    awaiting something together.
    Hot, sexy, drawn-out breath
    on the neck,
    and a head carressing a shoulder.
    Arms encircling,
    clasping nervous palms
    and worried, little fingers,
    feeling the exchange
    of so very much
    without so much as a word,
    so quiet,
    so comforting,
    so welcomed.

    ...sorry if i butchered it, but its a suggestion and in the end teh author gets teh last say and can accept whatever they want or choose to decline everything...you may also want to rethink the line "with arms wide open" its sort of overused when explaining a hug but i couldn't think of anything to replace it so maybe it should stay....
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Goulet
    here goes Being...its an attempt so that you start in on mine too, but maybe try it this way...

    To Hug

    To give a warm smile
    with arms open wide,
    awaiting movement,
    awaiting something together.
    Hot, sexy, drawn-out breath
    on the neck,
    and a head carressing a shoulder.
    Arms encircling,
    clasping nervous palms
    and worried, little fingers,
    feeling the exchange
    of so very much
    without so much as a word,
    so quiet,
    so comforting,
    so welcomed.

    ...sorry if i butchered it, but its a suggestion and in the end teh author gets teh last say and can accept whatever they want or choose to decline everything...you may also want to rethink the line "with arms wide open" its sort of overused when explaining a hug but i couldn't think of anything to replace it so maybe it should stay....

    a sexy hug? not sure that belongs...
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  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by CranMalReign
    a sexy hug? not sure that belongs...

    when i read B.E's - it seemed to me an embrace between people that were intimate with one another - and not in a familial or friendly way.

    so to me the whole

    "Hot, sexy, drawn-out breath
    on the neck,
    and a head carressing a shoulder."

    sounded very - yes please.

    then again, maybe my mind is just in places it shouldn't be today.
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Goulet
    here goes Being...its an attempt so that you start in on mine too, but maybe try it this way...

    To Hug

    To give a warm smile
    with arms open wide,
    awaiting movement,
    awaiting something together.
    Hot, sexy, drawn-out breath
    on the neck,
    and a head carressing a shoulder.
    Arms encircling,
    clasping nervous palms
    and worried, little fingers,
    feeling the exchange
    of so very much
    without so much as a word,
    so quiet,
    so comforting,
    so welcomed.

    ...sorry if i butchered it, but its a suggestion and in the end teh author gets teh last say and can accept whatever they want or choose to decline everything...you may also want to rethink the line "with arms wide open" its sort of overused when explaining a hug but i couldn't think of anything to replace it so maybe it should stay....

    *Taking notes*---hey! I DID NOT say "with arms wide open" I said--arms open wide! :)

    Thanks Goulet (deedley-doodley)---but don't expect miracles from me-at least not yet! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    Being - this was all just a suggestion so now go write in a notebook and make your own suggestions to yourself and we'll all be the better for it

    and coleen, your mind should always be places that it shouldn't...
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Goulet
    Being - this was all just a suggestion so now go write in a notebook and make your own suggestions to yourself and we'll all be the better for it

    and coleen, your mind should always be places that it shouldn't...

    Goulet----:D :D The student is listening (and wearing her little school girl kilt! :p)

    And yes coleen---keep your mind in the gutter, it's fun down here!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Goulet----:D :D The student is listening (and wearing her little school girl kilt! :p)

    And yes coleen---keep your mind in the gutter, it's fun down here!

    wow a school girl..NOW i'm listening
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Goulet
    wow a school girl..NOW i'm listening

    Here's one I posted previously on page 9 in Radar's Rot thread--you may like...

    Drama class was fun
    I enjoyed it, kilt clad & fancy free
    One day I was 1st to class
    There was a baby doll
    Hancuffed to my teacher's office door handle
    He laughed and said "I DON'T KNOW HOW I'M GOING TO GET IT OFF"
    I said "I CAN GET IT OFF"
    Inside my bag I went
    Found my keys
    Found the handcuff key
    Removed the cuff from around the dolly's neck
    Removed the other cuff from around the door handle
    Smiled at the teacher, teacher smiled back
    Teacher said "You're so alluring"
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    spank
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by Goulet
    spank

    me too
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  • Goulet
    Goulet Posts: 918
    spank
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Oooo! That tickles! Hit me again! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • coleen
    coleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Being Enlightened
    Goulet----:D :D The student is listening (and wearing her little school girl kilt! :p)

    And yes coleen---keep your mind in the gutter, it's fun down here!

    now you see, again...i leave for one hour and look at what happens in this place.

    it turns into..."dear penthouse...i mean poetry forum, i never thought it would happen to me......."

    :(

    next time wait for me. i'd like to play too.

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