Picture of Words

NoOne'sRivalNoOne'sRival Posts: 299
edited June 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sitting...sun is beating
Breeze, it takes my breath away
Standing, talking
Doesn't hear the words i say

Painting pictures with her words
Saying things I've never seen
All the pain is felt within
Close my eyes to see the sunlight
No brighter darkness has there been

Walking, ocean rolls in at my feet
Breathing, feel my heart it skpped a beat
Turning her head away...now in darkness I will stay
"Dream the dream others then...you will be no one's RIVAL!"
"Doo do do do doo do doo, Doo do do do doo do doo..."
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  • lobb152lobb152 Posts: 193
    I like this a lot.
    I am a nothing dreaming of something unknown.
  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    chuckles wrote:
    Turning her head away...now in darkness I will stay
    come out of the darkness... and she may look your way.
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • SD533SD533 Posts: 221
    Hey, stare open eyed right up into the full blast of the blinding sun, and you will find - that's where the fun is.
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