puddles to ashes

CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
edited April 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Is it just a thought passing through your mind
or have you really decided to spend the time
going back and forth
breathing in and out
tossing and turning
bringing so much doubt

eternal happiness weighs upon the mind
God's a devil trying to hide
if it becomes what there once was
I'll never know if it was love
don't close your eyes
don't give in
it's all his decision to prey upon sin

when I know the truth
I collapse inside
I know there are reasons
of which to abide
living too much for the hopes of your mother
breathing too much for the thoughts of another
open your heart
let me in
forget that there was a heartache of sin








rain, rain come my way.... bring me a puddle to jump in today.
"I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
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  • Cinnamon GirlCinnamon Girl Posts: 1,854
    Wow....very fluid. That last line is perfection. :)
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  • CHANGEinWAVESCHANGEinWAVES Posts: 10,169
    thanks
    :)
    "I'm not present, I'm a drug that makes you dream"
  • Solid, solid poem/song.
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