my pj poem

shaggy15
shaggy15 Posts: 190
edited April 2009 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I have to write 10 differant kinds of peoms for my reading methods 4-9th grade so i came up with this poem.
What do u think? i will take any suggestions for differant words. it is not due to the 24

Popular after all these years
E ntergtic
A Around since 91
R ocking in the free world
L ollapollooza
J eremy
A udiance particapation
M y favorite band
like a dog chasing a car, I do not know what i would do with it if i caught it----Joker

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  • shaggy15
    shaggy15 Posts: 190
    guess it is that good no one has ant suggestions. jk
    like a dog chasing a car, I do not know what i would do with it if i caught it----Joker

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  • LONGRD
    LONGRD Posts: 6,036
    shaggy10680 wrote:
    guess it is that good no one has ant suggestions. jk
    not too many people post in PPM&A section that much anymore.
    majority of them were non-10C members.

    Nice poem by the way but couldn't you come up something better for J? :lol:
    PJ- 04/29/2003.06/24,25,27,28,30/2008.10/27,28,30,31/2009
    EV- 08/09,10/2008.06/08,09/2009

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