Just something I felt like spilling.

nicool

So it's 3am and I'm the only nocturnal one in my group of friends. This simply means I will let out my frustrations on here. No, it doesn't do any good, but whatever. Guess I'm selfish. Felt like writing, used to do it on here a lot, thought I might give it a try again.



A strangled smile carves her face
Wounded and angry, she quivers with dismay.

Fragile and forgotten.

She sees nothing but black, through broken eyes
Hiding these scars which should have took her life.

Tainted and scorned.

Shame flows like blood as he enters the room
The stigmata of decay exists in his presence
This revolting stench concealed with time
Lungs Collapse as she gasps for air,
For her screams mark the origin of his brutal affair
Innocent skin defiled, violated and torn.

Conquered and helpless

Cannot resist.

Chained to a violent bed of Disgrace,
The lacerations reveal his strength.
As she crumbles to nothing in this disturbing embrace.
His eyes cold with pleasure,
Scarred into her brain

Contaminated, lifeless.

Strangled by death’s welcoming grip
A smile appears as the blood starts to drip
Release from the chamber you once locked her in
A girl once forgotten

Has been freed from your sin.

EvilMerlin

Write your heart out all you want on here. I'll always be up to read it, as I am nocturnal as well.

We're of a lonely kind, you and I.

I find beauty in hurt, and that was gorgeous.

Do whatever is theraputic to you regardless of what others feel. There's always some of us who never mind, and will always care. I hope your frustrations will soon be gone.

dunkman

there is a poetry and prose forum. might get some feedback/contributions there.

SENROCK

nicool wrote:

So it's 3am and I'm the only nocturnal one in my group of friends. This simply means I will let out my frustrations on here. No, it doesn't do any good, but whatever. Guess I'm selfish. Felt like writing, used to do it on here a lot, thought I might give it a try again.



A strangled smile carves her face
Wounded and angry, she quivers with dismay.

Fragile and forgotten.

She sees nothing but black, through broken eyes
Hiding these scars which should have took her life.

Tainted and scorned.

Shame flows like blood as he enters the room
The stigmata of decay exists in his presence
This revolting stench concealed with time
Lungs Collapse as she gasps for air,
For her screams mark the origin of his brutal affair
Innocent skin defiled, violated and torn.

Conquered and helpless

Cannot resist.

Chained to a violent bed of Disgrace,
The lacerations reveal his strength.
As she crumbles to nothing in this disturbing embrace.
His eyes cold with pleasure,
Scarred into her brain

Contaminated, lifeless.

Strangled by death’s welcoming grip
A smile appears as the blood starts to drip
Release from the chamber you once locked her in
A girl once forgotten

Has been freed from your sin.

NICOOL!!!! where have u been?! its good to see u and that was pretty awesome!

SENROCK

dunkman wrote:

there is a poetry and prose forum. might get some feedback/contributions there.

Poetry in a homemade scrapbook with a cabbage patch doll is what ure getting for chrismakuh!!!

dunkman

SENROCK! wrote:

Poetry in a homemade scrapbook with a cabbage patch doll is what ure getting for chrismakuh!!!

awesome.. as due to the high energy prices i do actually require stuff to burn

nicool

I'm not looking for feedback. I'm selfishly dumping my crap on you guys since nobody else will listen.

On a lighter note, missed you sen! I've been crazy busy. going to school, gonna be a veterinary assistant soon.

SENROCK

dunkman wrote:

awesome.. as due to the high energy prices i do actually require stuff to burn

that is really not nice.

pjfan31

That was really good. I wish I could write like that. I once came 2nd in a poetry competition when I was in year 5. That was about being in my favourite football team

But keep it up, I find this AET a good place to say what is on my mind, things that I would normally keep to myself. Welll Done.

dunkman

nicool wrote:

I'm not looking for feedback. I'm selfishly dumping my crap on you guys since nobody else will listen.

yeah i was trying to be polite... basically i was meaning you should post it on that forum cos poetry on the AET is about as welcome as R Kelly at a teenage disco.

nicool

dunkman wrote:

yeah i was trying to be polite... basically i was meaning you should post it on that forum cos poetry on the AET is about as welcome as R Kelly at a teenage disco.

oh i know, I used to go on here allllll night a cpl years ago, i know what it's about. Was in a bad mood last night and didn't really care who read. I appreciate the concern, though.

catch22

nicool wrote:

So it's 3am and I'm the only nocturnal one in my group of friends. This simply means I will let out my frustrations on here. No, it doesn't do any good, but whatever. Guess I'm selfish. Felt like writing, used to do it on here a lot, thought I might give it a try again.

i remember you.

SENROCK

nicool wrote:

oh i know, I used to go on here allllll night a cpl years ago, i know what it's about. Was in a bad mood last night and didn't really care who read. I appreciate the concern, though.

a couple years ago when it was happening up in here! those were fun times!!!

samick

SENROCK! wrote:

a couple years ago when it was happening up in here! those were fun times!!!

Yes they were...........maybe????.........

Black Diamond

SENROCK! wrote:

a couple years ago when it was happening up in here! those were fun times!!!

Chrismakuh is a BD copyrighted word!

That it'll 10 cents please

SENROCK

Black Diamond wrote:

Chrismakuh is a BD copyrighted word!

That it'll 10 cents please

HAHAHAHA i did it in honor of you!!!!