Crazy

scharli13
scharli13 Posts: 26
edited May 2004 in The Art Wall
Caught up in my own little world
Reality slipping away
No one to relate to
No one understands
Trying to live
Falling back into pain
Just can't get away
Reality is quickly subsiding
Life is just too much
Too much hurt and evil
Too much for my soul to take
Reality is life
and that is something I can't relate.
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  • rafa
    rafa Posts: 50
    Like your poems because - i might sound very simple. almost stupid- they are not to long. so i can see them in a moment,
    and read them for a moment and loose myself in them for another moment if i like to.

    Also like the content.
  • scharli13
    scharli13 Posts: 26
    Thank you very much! I've often thought my heart(thats what my poems are) sounds very stupid. But I write totally what I feel. So as long as I get it out I don't care if it sounds bad. Someone somewhere can relate! Thanks again.
  • Black*Kiss
    Black*Kiss Posts: 1
    very good... you and i write alike...maybe once i get to know people on here i'll post some of my own stuff...but anywho....very very good work
  • scharli13
    scharli13 Posts: 26
    Thanks! I used to write differently and sometimes I still do but I figured short and sweet and straight to the point is just as good and less confusing. Sometimes what I write is confusing anyway.
    You should post your stuff, I don't know that many ppl on here but I post anyway. I'de like to read some. I'm going to be drawing some pictures of the pple who have inspired me the most in my life(including my dead mother) and posting it. Some of my stuff isn't too good but the worst anyone can do is cuss me for it. And pple's opinions don't bother me much. Well they do to a point but you knoow. Anywhoooo, (I like your word!) WELCOME to the site. It's a wonderful community!!!!!!!!
  • rafa
    rafa Posts: 50
    MY ROOM

    You are strange, somekind of mad
    your reality is not mine... it's bad
    feel like a fish
    trying to breath air
    cant live in your world,
    cant live here...

    You call me crazy, i call you evil
    seems we are both insane...
    are we both to blame?
    still insane
    cant live in your world,
    cant live here...

    I have to reach out to find me a home,
    an own world...
    do you understand?
    dont be sad...
    i'll soon invite you to step into my room.


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    Inspiration:

    Crazy (from scharli13)

    Caught up in my own little world
    Reality slipping away
    No one to relate to
    No one understands
    Trying to live
    Falling back into pain
    Just can't get away
    Reality is quickly subsiding
    Life is just too much
    Too much hurt and evil
    Too much for my soul to take
    Reality is life
    and that is something I can't relate.

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