Mom

scharli13
scharli13 Posts: 26
edited May 2004 in The Art Wall
On the ledge of suicide
dancing in the darkness
touching your face
feeling your wounds
crashing into madness
seeping into madness
living for nothing
away from you
growing stronger from your words
being one with you
psycho
babble
sucking luscious thoughts
drowning in your words
walk with you anywhere
give me sweet release
helpo me save myself.
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  • Heatherj43
    Heatherj43 Posts: 1,254
    This sounds like the story in " Why Go"...Excellent piece. I enjoyed it.
    Save room for dessert!
  • scharli13
    scharli13 Posts: 26
    Thank you. I wrote this after seeing Eddie live. My mother had just passed away and I was inspired by him and her and society. Anyway thanks.
  • onejourney
    onejourney Posts: 285
    I really liked it....

    Theres something about it....peaceful I guess....:)
    "...just be glad you have the music and cherish it for yourself..." -stateoflove79
  • scharli13
    scharli13 Posts: 26
    Thank you! It was written peacefully.

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