My Hurt

scharli13

fighting the bitter sting of life
swelling with sadness
trial upon trial for what?!
Character, I have none anymore
just this bitter sweet emptines
I miss once strong connections
now broken with time
my soul is shattered
my existence meanigless
Every attemtp for reality, futile
Everywhere is bitterness
or emptiness
or people feeling the same as me.

rafa

THE POISON

YOU ARE HURTING ME BUT I AM NOT LEAVING
YOU ARE HURTING ME BUT I AM STILL TRYING
TO UNDERSTAND YOU, ... I AM STILL TRYING
TO RELATE TO.... THE THINGS YOU SAY
CAN'T UNDERSTAND THE THINGS YOU DO

YOU ARE HURTING ME BUT I'M NOT LEAVING, FIGHTING
THE POISON YOU ARE VOMITTING
THE POISON YOU VOMIT
THE POISON SOMEONE GAVE YOU TO EAT
THE POISON YOU ATE
THE POISON YOU GAVE ME TO EAT
THE POISON I ATE
I DONT WANT TO POISON

YOU WERE HURTING ME,
I WAS HURTING YOU,
SO I BEGAN TO CHANGE.

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My Hurt (from scharli13)

fighting the bitter sting of life
swelling with sadness
trial upon trial for what?!
Character, I have none anymore
just this bitter sweet emptines
I miss once strong connections
now broken with time
my soul is shattered
my existence meanigless
Every attemtp for reality, futile
Everywhere is bitterness
or emptiness
or people feeling the same as me.

scharli13

Wow I am impressed. I would have responded sooner but haven't been on in awhile. I think yours is much better than mine. Wow!

rafa

Thanks, well I like your poem as much as mine. I believe this is the thing about communication,... At least I try to take the feelings, words or thoughts of someone and see what it awakes in me... I think that's how a dialogue can begin... exchange ideas, thoughts, feelings...
Thanks also for having shared your poems on the Forum...