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Sappy, I know.

Vedderlution_BabyVedderlution_Baby Posts: 2,545
edited February 2004 in The Art Wall
Alright, So I wrote this song to my girl and recently I was going to enter a poem contest and converted the song into a poem. Personally I like the song better because it's longer and I left some lines out of the poem. But here it is. If you guys like it I'll post the actual lyrics some time.

Escape to Run Free

I'm just walking now, coming back to you
Just want to fall in your velvet soft arms
Away from it all
Just want to kiss your rose pale lips
And just forget about it all
So just throw your arms around me
And let's let the world continue to pass us on with ease
So throw your arms around me
And let or hearts escape so they can run long and free
Let our hearts escape to runlong and free
Or hearts have to run to breathe and be free to live
So throw your arms around me
Just throw your arms around me...




I tried my best.
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    Sharon_Hearts_PJSharon_Hearts_PJ Bristol, PA Posts: 1,383
    have you tried this out over at the Poetry forum? they love new blood! :)
    *Rock and/or Roll!*
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    rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    sappy??


    yeah right! beautiful! my bf would like it.

    sweet and romantic words@---)
    perfect time for V-day


    thanks for sharing

    it would make a good song
    Rarghstarfarian.
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