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By Erin Garrett
You need one more coin for this here,
Ferris wheel.
You need to be 5 feet,
To walk on this here street.
Tell me, if you could, would you make the world flat.
So you can run to one side, and try to run back.
You need one more quarter to buy this here,
Crate of fear.
You need a better family,
To impress me, my dear.
Tell me if you could would you make the world round,
So you can bounce it on the ground
make it go from up to down.
You need one more dollar,
To get home.
This area is restricted,
Don’t feel free to roam.
Tell me if you could would you make me clear as glass,
So you can see right through me, with no questions asked.
By Erin Garrett
You need one more coin for this here,
Ferris wheel.
You need to be 5 feet,
To walk on this here street.
Tell me, if you could, would you make the world flat.
So you can run to one side, and try to run back.
You need one more quarter to buy this here,
Crate of fear.
You need a better family,
To impress me, my dear.
Tell me if you could would you make the world round,
So you can bounce it on the ground
make it go from up to down.
You need one more dollar,
To get home.
This area is restricted,
Don’t feel free to roam.
Tell me if you could would you make me clear as glass,
So you can see right through me, with no questions asked.
They filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
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I'm no connoisseur of poetry or prose, but that's good. It's written like it should be set to music. I felt like singing at times. But you wouldn't want that.0
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hehe thank you... it is a song... i have music for itThey filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame0 -
I like that one, AsPrivileged...er...Erin!0
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thanksThey filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame0 -
Wow, I really, really, like that. I would love to hear it with the music you have for it.
If I may ask, what instrument do you play? If you ever record any of this, let me know. I would love to hear your stuff. If your other lyrics are as good as this, I would love to see more.Instagram: @this_day_in_pearl_jam_history (https://instagram.com/this_day_in_pearl_jam_history?igshid=4u0yq06nj58a)All Those Yesterdays: This Day In Pearl Jam History - Sharing show anniversaries, releases, appearances, and more.0 -
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