The chaos

finnanniefinnannie Posts: 1,186
I wrote this about two years ago and you can also find it from my deviantart page but I thought I'd post it here as well.



The chaos

we are all one
we are everywhere
in every time
place
every corner of the universe
we are everything
we are

we are all
like pieces of mirror
broken
incomplete
still functional
still the same
still different
we are all pieces
of the same great puzzling image
pieces of the same mirror
reflecting each other
a web made of stars
we are
everything
building this reality, piece by piece
this illusion
this complicated existence
this moment
called now
blinding
mind numbing
experience
this confusing thing called "living"
we are the ones who create this existence
this amazing consciousness
the energy the electricity
between every little particle
it is our mind that makes it possible
because everything is possible in our dreams
mind knows no borders, limits, if you realize it
mind is infinite, unlimited, unrestricted, free

there is no history
past
present
future
there is only now, in my mind
all time is here, now
everyone of us is here, now, wherever they are
now, is everywhere. here we are
this moment
now
eternity
infinity
its all here
right now

everything that is
is us
everything is us and by us
we make it all
we are everything
everyone and everything
we are here
nowhere
everywhere
we are
we are
one

we can't see the truth
we can't find it
because its right here
its us
we are the truth
the truth is in us
and is us
we are
the truth
we will find
alone
Won't let the light escape from me.
Won't let the darkness swallow me.
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Comments

  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    that's totally way cool
    i agree with ya
    if only more ppl felt this way

    i say we're all equal
    as in
    all life

    equal

    sure some ppl are terrible..

    i am saying this..
    a human is no better or superior than any other creature
    and that goes for trees and such..

    that's just how i am

    all life = equals

    whadya ya think about that?
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • finnanniefinnannie Posts: 1,186
    chadwick wrote:
    that's totally way cool
    i agree with ya
    if only more ppl felt this way

    i say we're all equal
    as in
    all life

    equal

    sure some ppl are terrible..

    i am saying this..
    a human is no better or superior than any other creature
    and that goes for trees and such..

    that's just how i am

    all life = equals

    whadya ya think about that?

    all life is equal, but most of the human population just seems like the worst cancer this planet has ever had. If I was asked, do I consider myself equal or as worthy as that tree standing outside, I would propably say yes, but I'm not sure how would I make it work in real life, I mean, human population abuses most of this planet - so its easy for me to say all of us are equal, but its hard to really respect all living things... live and let live doesnt always work out really well, we are a greedy breed ;) But I, myself, try do the best I can, most of the time.
    Won't let the light escape from me.
    Won't let the darkness swallow me.
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    finnannie wrote:
    all life is equal, but most of the human population just seems like the worst cancer this planet has ever had. If I was asked, do I consider myself equal or as worthy as that tree standing outside, I would propably say yes, but I'm not sure how would I make it work in real life, I mean, human population abuses most of this planet - so its easy for me to say all of us are equal, but its hard to really respect all living things... live and let live doesnt always work out really well, we are a greedy breed ;) But I, myself, try do the best I can, most of the time.

    ppl are the cancerous growth blooming well
    breeding well worn cob wedded problems
    this earth just doesn't need or deserve

    i am shutting up now
    or you'll never shut me up
    on this topic

    anyways, i like your style in this poem
    nice
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • finnanniefinnannie Posts: 1,186
    chadwick wrote:
    ppl are the cancerous growth blooming well
    breeding well worn cob wedded problems
    this earth just doesn't need or deserve

    i am shutting up now
    or you'll never shut me up
    on this topic

    anyways, i like your style in this poem
    nice

    well put, thanks for the comments. :)
    Won't let the light escape from me.
    Won't let the darkness swallow me.
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