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speak in knives

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited November 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
eternity is a trace
around hands of clocks
fathomed fame and a failure's fortune
were all that ever awaited me

divide the devices
by the skeletons
of the trees x-rayed
and illuminated by the christmas lights

nothing hides from us successfully
nobody loves you like i do
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    There's nothing like the bare bones of a tree in winter. Why in hell we dress it up and festoon it in lights is beyond me. Must be a pagan thang, heh.

    Walden, I luvs your work. You're one of my favorite poets here at the Pit. Just wanted to take the opportunity to say so.

    Peace,
    Bu2
    Feels Good Inc.
  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    Well I greatly appreciate both positive and negative feedback.

    I'm glad you enjoy my writing.
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