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walden freeman

i started out alone:

one small bruise
on my father's arm

later

i forged
out of iron
somehow a diamond battleship

so camouflaged with the tropical water
that when it sank
it became impossible to find

justam

It took me a while to figure out what you meant by starting as a small bruise on your father's arm. I'm still not sure if I know what you intended, but I thought of two possibilities.

This one is interesting.