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the starving traveler dies (of heat stroke)

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited October 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
in the moist grass on a frigid night our feet got at every wedding we've ever attended combined. it's okay though, our generation was raised by eyebrows, so high on pedastals that we fell off our curbs with laughter. now it's months later and we're minutes older and ready for battle. come on, don't hesitate to put everything off, it's a way of life and we're the best at it.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I hate to state the obvious. (Actually I don't!) But, perhaps you have trouble because you confuse people with the way you talk?
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  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    The first sentence should mention that the feet got colder. However, once again the lack of an edit feature makes me unable to correct what I've written.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Sometimes people use the quote button and edit it in the quote. (You can use a colored or bold text to make it stand out or just mention what you're correcting underneath the quote.)

    Sometimes I do that when I really need to change a word or correct my spelling.
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