a clear afternoon prayer

walden freeman

dear god,
harm me in every way
cast me to hell in a book
hell in a bed. hell!
my head hurts the worst that it ever has
sunburned comets melting my heart
burning up in atmospheres undiscovered
dear sweet mary, virgin mother
of an alcoholic, anonymous
sinner at the busstop begging
for your change of heart
please rescue the cold
with a little change of clothes
we could all be better
than we've ever been
amen

walden freeman

***hell in a handbook


Fuck, edit function please?

prism

walden freeman wrote:

***hell in a handbook


Fuck, edit function please?

wow this is great...


i agree that your edit pulls it together with much more impact





where's the petition to get the edit function in this forum?

walden freeman

Actually to really gain a better impact I'd reformat this a little bit. The lack of an edit function is ass.

prism

walden freeman wrote:

Actually to really gain a better impact I'd reformat this a little bit. The lack of an edit function is ass.

that's cool


okay should the petition for an edit button in this forum be titled "forgive me father, for i have sinned?" or "forgive me mod(der) for i have sinned?"

walden freeman

How about "Give me the edit function, or give me death!"

Dylan Stone

another fine work, walden.

even without an edit button

(I too would REALLY like an edit button!!!! Hell yeah. )

walden freeman

Thank you dear.

catefrances

walden freeman wrote:

...The lack of an edit function is ass.

amen to that brother.