pontius pirate

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
dated 9-17-2006:

stephanie,
i can't stop polluting my pages with thoughts about your face and fingers and the snapping and the snapping sensation in my neck that leaves me with no sensation at all. tra la la, again and again, recycled trash. tragedy triumphs over triumph, tidally waving at one another; sea to shining (sea)onvertible in the late summer sunsets that your body replaced in the "i like to stare at this" department of the marketplace in my brain. wallstreet minus street plus of bricks. a great age of anchors is passing, i wish you could let me rust like the rest of them. pizza shops and fast food grease stains on the maps of our small-town heritage remind us that a trip to the city would be okay if not for our pesky low-paying jobs and the rising price of gasoline.

see what i've done here? it's another letter you won't be able to decipher. bible code this, crossword that. jesus saves and the church saves money on tax-free purchases at the local chain stores. my idea of a philosophical debate: whether the jets should've changed the team name after 9-11. well, the titans was taken by tennessee so taking that name back is out. on that note, houston, who lost the oilers who became the tennessee titans, took the texans so if the chiefs ever moved back to dallas they couldn't become the texans again. oh, what a fucking mess. i'm so philosophical with what you claim to be trivial matters.

remember when you told me that jesus saves and i laughed at you? well, you were right, jesus did save me . . .

for last.
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Comments

  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    wow....very good. the last sentence makes quite an impressive impact
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
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  • Am I atheist or a theist?
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    atheist?


    that's just how i read it...coming from the p.o.v. of a non-Christian, atheist-leaning agnostic that was raised Catholic.
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • prism wrote:
    atheist?


    that's just how i read it...coming from the p.o.v. of a non-Christian, atheist-leaning agnostic that was raised Catholic.

    Looks like you and I have quite a bit in common. Kudos.
  • And this one.

    At least i'm *reading* again... and that's a start.

    This is so very good!

    wow. :)
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