supernova in a coffee mug

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
oh! if only my appendages were
more than just a surplus
of stangling hands
and syringes filled
with jellyfish blood washing up
in reaching waves erasing
my phobias
and my phobias include:
x'es on maps, shovels,
and most of all
holding anything of value
within this chest
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Comments

  • I really enjoy the images and word choice. I'd like to see something different with the form though, the beauty gets lost somewhere in there....
    "be a philosopher but, amid all your philosophy, be first a man" - david hume

    Mitch Hedberg- RIP 1968-2005. your jokes have laughed me through a lot. I thank you.
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