supernova in a coffee mug

walden freeman

oh! if only my appendages were
more than just a surplus
of stangling hands
and syringes filled
with jellyfish blood washing up
in reaching waves erasing
my phobias
and my phobias include:
x'es on maps, shovels,
and most of all
holding anything of value
within this chest

blueintheface

I really enjoy the images and word choice. I'd like to see something different with the form though, the beauty gets lost somewhere in there....