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write you wrongs (2)

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you have harp-plucked
my heartstrings
and dammed my blood
for far too long
heartless as a hurricane
and by heart
i mean handbag
and by hurricane
i mean everything
to you
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  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    How the fuck do i always have so many typos? Ugh! write youR wrongs.
  • pearljam132112pearljam132112 Posts: 50
    walden freeman wrote:
    How the fuck do i always have so many typos? Ugh! write youR wrongs.

    im the same way!!
    hahah i typo everything.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    walden freeman wrote:
    you have harp-plucked
    my heartstrings
    and dammed my blood
    for far too long
    heartless as a hurricane
    and by heart
    i mean handbag
    and by hurricane
    i mean everything
    to you

    I like the way you used all the h sounds in this one. :)
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