promises and apologies

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i gave you my heart and fittingly became heartless, and predictably happy. we ran the road over, carelessly leaving it behind to breathe its final breathes alone in agony. asphault half as black as our hearts and a fraction as hard as our ribs glistens with the broken glass of the night before. each step we take is to a destination we are not destined to arrive at before our guiding lights and guardian angels and vast armies of highly-trained snipers pick off all impending threats with such perfect precision and skill that they could seemingly do the job in their sleep and, unfortunately we'll come to find out, they were asleep and simply dreaming and we are doomed! the sun will not go down without a fight. no.
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    I like this one a lot.

    One correction: the second breathes should be breaths.

    I like this a lot, though.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • Hey thanks! Yeah I always typo it up. I gotta be more careful.
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