i think this is the first actual poem i ever wrote (circa 2001)

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
sit and watch the sun as it goes down
an orange sky goes pink all over town
the days don't ever seem to move this slow
the summer's almost here i'm sure you know

to sit and watch the waves as they all bloom
one-hundred-million inches going boom
the ocean never seems to move this slow
the tide is getting higher i think you should know

to sit and watch the sky as it gets blue
an endless million miles there to view
the memories are never made this slow
the darkness here is leaving i want you to know

to sit and hold my hand, kiss me goodbye
we'll shoot september right between the eyes
the winter always seems to move so slow
but once april is over i'll be here just so you know
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Nice! This is just the right time of year for it. :)
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