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walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited April 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
watch your face as it makes
low-budget films
in a mirror
more silver than the rest of your room
while the time zones out
and zooms in on
a pastry filled
with futuristic sounds
of rusting metal
and a girl selling herself short
again and again
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This one is interesting. I can picture it well except for the pastry filled with rusty metallic sounds.
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