cannibalism is cool (you can't spell death without eat)

walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited February 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there are no measures
to be taken
wind cannot soften
its blows
or launder
any valuables stolen
or dry any eyes

winter may contain
arrows affecting
infecting our arms
in vain
every pun is intended
every breeze hurts a little more

i have suggested
starting over
filling our plates with poison
and taking them for granted
or stalling
in heavy traffic

all directions are dangerous

there is no compromise
without promise
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This is a very dark piece. If starting over is equal to filling a plate with poison, it doesn't sound like a very good idea! :eek:
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  • sounds like "i'll swallow poison till i grow imune",
    a bit less dark then!
    E
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    eulusso wrote:
    sounds like "i'll swallow poison till i grow imune",
    a bit less dark then!
    E

    That's an interesting slant, but I still think swallowing poison can't be good. :p
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