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walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
edited August 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the whales whining are warning of a coming storm
in love letters and comic strips
more perfect than sketches of god,
more hail than mary,
and more marketability than danger

i awoke to the sounds
of deafening thunder
and was instantly able to fall back asleep
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  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    walden freeman wrote:
    the whales whining are warning of a coming storm
    in love letters and comic strips
    more perfect than sketches of god,
    more hail than mary,
    and more marketability than danger

    i awoke to the sounds
    of deafening thunder
    and was instantly able to fall back asleep

    that's very cool
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • Rjonesrm20Rjonesrm20 Posts: 380
    walden freeman wrote:
    the whales whining are warning of a coming storm
    in love letters and comic strips
    more perfect than sketches of god,
    more hail than mary,
    and more marketability than danger

    i awoke to the sounds
    of deafening thunder
    and was instantly able to fall back asleep


    i really like this...
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  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    Why thank you my fine comrades.
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